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Abstract: comment on the argument (why would it impact risk management), and after describing your results, comment on the implications
- Gives evidence for the view that risk preferences are fixed, or at least, not so easy to change
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Good job in the introduction. You can be a little bit more extensive when describing your results, and, as in the abstract, reflect on the implications
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The literature review also looks nice and very structured
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Tables look very nice now
- Table 9: like table 8, this kind of supports a change in risk preferences, so maybe it is too one-sided to say that there is absolutely no support for changes in preferences
- Table 10: Change income should maybe be log-transformed?
- Similarly in some tables, there are still small coefficients
- Interpretation: Covid intensity does not influence the change in risk preferences
- Pitfalls: regional treatment assignment - not necessarily realistic
- Think about the interpretation of results like in table 8, 9
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Conclusion:
We have found that risk preferences were not altered by Covid-19 for most individuals in the Netherlands, and for those whose risk preferences were altered, the change was random
- What do you mean with this line?
- You have a couple of sentences like this